Very very Good, Worth more listening
It's almost spot on, the only problem i found is that it's a tad repeatable, i think you could have experimented some more on where you can take this, your crescendo builds up to the same thing but the melody i believe isn't strong enough to get it home on its own. To better understand what i'm saying you should take a listen, if you already haven't, to Zbigniew Preisner's Lacrimosa (Tree of Life) In Lacrimosa Preisner found a strong melody that is so captivating that allows him to drag it on and on, not saying you should be Preisner, but when you're talking war you're talking sacrifice and i think you covered only half of your theme's potential. I love your choir samples, what did you use for that?
Hi, thanks for listening and thank you very much for the feedback, i have had a few people now tell that perhaps it is a bit repeatable but at the time i was so much in the zone of what i was creating and liked the chords so much that i repeated them adding new elements stemming from the chords every 4 or 8 bars. When i first started to produce music years ago i was into electronic music and i think i carry over the methods a bit too much i think, trance was one of my main styles and imo trance is the art of repetition and when done right can be hypnotic, but i think i am starting to learn a bit more from this style and will continue until i master it but also i will still experiment and use elements of my electronic love as well, i don't like to limit myself to a genre box too much as i like to just create from the heart, and i used symphobia 3 lumina and shevannai for the choir samples.
Nice! But i think strings need to be a little bit more softly.
And General melody always same.. (Sounds like a loop only instrumetns change.).
Just my opinion. Anyway, almost perfect ;) :) Well done.!
Thanks for listening :)
I liked it, it reminds me of mulan a bit, probobly because of the war.
All the vocals are on point and emotional, and the strings fit perfectly.
There are two things I think could have been better:
1.It drags a little bit, there are long segments where nothing changes.
2.As beatiful it is to listen to, the lack of a melody makes this song not very memorable.
All around this song is pretty good, and I can see it being played during an actual (dramatic, not action packed) war scene.
Thanks for listening and the feedback i appreciate it :)
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