This doesn't really belong in the heavy metal category, more like video game or "drum and bass". I think the kick drum needs to stand out more and turn up the snare. It doesn't strike as hard as it could. Mix needs a little bit of work, i'd turn up the guitars some too. Needs a bit of tweaking, but really cool concept, I like it.
wow, looks like a eletronic heavy metal, really amazing \m/
Thank you kindly! \m/