It's very majestic and flowing. Sometimes, the pacing is a bit off IMO. For example, it seems like you were going for some sort of dramatic pause at 1:06, and then you sort of rushed into 1:07. I like the structural relief you start providing around the 2-minute mark. That part is lighter and more tranquil. Then, you sort of abruptly transition back into some heavier, darker content, interrupting the flow with some more staccato notes. The way you sort of alternate styles (lighter and flowing vs. dark and staccato) may be a bit disorienting, but eventually I recognized that it helps capture a fleeting inner-struggle, rather ingeniously similar to the second-guessing that occurs after one realizes the potency of a seeming trifle of an afterthought. ;) Also, after reading the description I was a bit confused. Are there two different people who use this Newgrounds account? And, if so...which one is judging my competition? XD I thought "Winter" was simply your surname, Skye. 0_O Either way, I like the piece overall. The ending was a bit inconclusive, and it's a little stylistically disjointed (as I mentioned), but other than that this is solid work. Keep at it, SkyeWint. ^^
Nah, Winter isn't my surname. Winter is another person. I mainly use the account but I thought I should post her music on here as well. :) Don't worry, I'm judging the competition.
Just thought I'd post this on here and see how people liked it, especially since it's her first piece.
I'm going to buy you a stereo piano sample library one of these days... :P
All I gotta do is keep making piano pieces with this mono sample, eh? <3
srsly though this is great free piano soundfont.
This reminds me of some Final Fantasy music like in Advent Children there's this specific piano piece that comes to mind. Overall, this is great, maybe it's just me, but I feel this could be turned down a little, and the high end could be turned up a little, and maybe a little lower on the high mid, but maybe that's just me. This is brilliantly composed though, very creative. It flows nicely. Well done.
Thank you. We both tried our best. I could probably stand to make it a bit less bassy, I guess. I didn't go 100% through my normal mastering process. :(
Wow, this is a brilliant piece. Especially for basically being someome's full piece o.O
As a pianist, I really enjoy the harmonies, patterns and tempo stuff (I'm very great at theoretical terms, I know). The mixing is great too, and does a lot for the overall sound.
Easy favorite, this one.
Coincidentally, I uploaded a track that was heavily inspired by johnfn today as well, although it's a pretty differet kind of track XD
Awesome job, both of you!!!
Glad you like it! :) Main thing I ended up doing for the mixing was getting rid of some cross-sample clicking that was going on with the loudest notes and maximizing it since piano alone is often too quiet to really be properly heard.
I'll have to listen to the track you uploaded!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.