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Jul 9, 2015 | 10:04 PM EDT
File Info
6.1 MB
2 min 52 sec
4.46 / 5.00

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Rated 4.46 / 5 stars
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951 Plays | 18 Downloads
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Hip Hop, Rap, R&B - Hip Hop - Olskool

Author Comments

It's a WRAP!

Zu-zu to Katara, cost lost frost auras;
Coded in black holes, whole scrolls, comas, commas,
Separate the rockas rockin' spots, frots;
Eliminate the clots, cops on tops and bottoms;
Bottomed cots causin' problems, cruddy, muddy
Less money, no honey bunnies, only studies, study;
Ruddy routers, ruts run; ran out of funds, Bums;
Told to seek butts, maybe get fucked, instead I buck;
Crazed ways, days, say tuck it in, scold to win, told I sin;
Silly shit I don't believe in, so I spit the revelation;
Contemplative contemplation, and yet everyone changin' stations;
Radial radios radiate radiation into air, pollination;
Stereo vibrations causing serial sensations, sated;
Highly dated, break away plated faces, secret places in stasis;
Stated stages staged cases, snakes through cages, wages warring races;
Complacent states flicker away, seems life is not a game;
Stays the same, bring down planes, frame the fame;
Proper & sane, insane, inane, plain to pain;
Nothing to lose or gain, I smack back wack fools;
Demolish your crew, eat the food, abolish fur tools;
Worry about the few who lose, get them back in the groove;
Grooves move moons, not too soon, womanly croons;

Digest this, and if nothing else, take something from it.

Please leave your honest opinion.


SAMPLE: Blue Submarine no. 6
SAMPLE: Portishead



Rated 4 / 5 stars

I love this so much. The only real criticism I can say is that the vocal mix is a bit low and it kinda takes me out of it sometimes, but the beat is just so good and the lyrics themselves add to the vibe of the whole thing. Great track.

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Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Def one of your more comfortable flow takes, I've heard from ya.Dope lyrics!

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Rated 5 / 5 stars


this is going on my ipod immediately.

God bless the child that could write his own rhymes!

Q ~~

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LiberalShimmering responds:

Thanks Q!


Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Very cool! Flow was really good in parts. some sections got a little sloppy, like you kinda weren't sure how to fit it onto the beat. That can be avoided by just taking your time and making sure a line flows before moving on to writing the next.

Vocab was great and I really liked the alliteration (ruddy routers ruts ran run, etc) It's a much too overlooked aspect of poetry in hip hop.

I think this was a great effort, and I hope you do more. You're weren't far off from this verse being perfect, and if you work at it and take some extra time you can dial it down like you do your beats.

Looking forward to the next one, and now I'm interested in a rap collab!

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Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Honest opinion? If this is your first vocal piece, then this is amazing. You lost breath once, and that was it. It's very hard to digest, but it is real dreamy, and yet stuff that makes sense. Wonderful I LOVE that show btw!

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