This is an interesting song!
The sounds are well made and the beats works most of the time.
The drums are a bit to sharp at times. The drum kit could possibly be replaced to fit the beat better, especially in the most intense part around 03:00. But it is probably very hard to make it sound good using any digital drum kit since the drum samples overlap in an unnatural way.
The song is also a bit too repetitive. It could maybe have a softer part where the listener could relax since the song is very intense most of the time.
Overall: Good job! Do not be afraid to step even further out of the traditional music comfort zone.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.