Cool beat, I like it.
sorry man only a 7 cus it didnt seem like u gave it ur all...i could be wrong u could of given it ur all but in the begining of the art work of yours...it gets too many diffrent beats goin on and throws you off. but other then that it was good. i gave you the 7 cus the begining can make a whole lot of a diffrence
Sorry man, but this just became too heavy for me. All the different sounds seemed to be crammed into the same frequency, making a sound-gravy that was very difficult to make any sense of, for me at least.
Of course this isn't a very difficult fix, just try to tone some instruments down, and use some lowpass/hipass filters, try to play around with it to make each instrument stand out.
The melody isn't that bad, even though also seemed to have the same problem as the rest of the song: to much crammed into one place. It may just be my sense of music though.
Don't take this offensive, I'm just trying to point out what could be done better, so you can create even cooler songs.
Keep up the good work, and you'll improve. You seem to be off to a good start.
thanx man I know wat u mean, this song I KNOW I didnt put in a lot of effort, I'll take ur advice next time
cool adiuo it is a nice beat
great job man!
you are the bomb! keep it up!!!