I've been seeing and listening to a lot of your work lately. I do like the length as it gives each piece a chance to really shine. The beginning is great and catches my attention, however as the song moves towards 1:09 it some how looses traction for the duration of 0:49 and the full transition to the next part I loose interest in because of the lose of appeal for nearly a minute.
I did listen to the rest of the song despite the hiccup. Over all It's good. Just find a way to make the rhythm follow into the next section of texture without losing your level of interest along the way.