I can understand the direction of this song-- but the structure needs some work. It did this weird tempo change that was a little uncomfortable for me at 0:45. I like that drum pattern though, it's really nice.
There's really no chord progression. The drums start glitching around 2:28 and I'm not sure if that was intentional but it was very off.
Overall I'd say that this needs some work, but with simple chord progression (even if it alternates from the same 2-3 chords, it'd be very nice.)
Also try some variation in the drum pattern. The same drum pattern from nearly start to finish with no chord progression and no set variation in song structure was a little boring.
It's a good start! I hope all of the criticism isn't super harsh. I like the feel of this song, it's just really big things that need attention that could make this really, really good.