This should be under the General Rock category man.
I like dthe song, it just needs some simple tune ups when it comes to the tune.
You should also make it a bit less edgy.
I give it a solid 4/5 for a good song, but a 9/10 for the good effort and hard work. Keep it up!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.