This song is solid. I can see a bassline going nicely in the chorus parts. Maybe an acoustic or semi-electric sounding bass with a smooth glide in between notes. The vocals, in terms of note placement and stuff, are nice. Good work with that.
While the hook was nice, and the instruments and chords were nice, I was a little bored. Not in a super bad way, but it's like I was expecting a little variation in the instrument patterns but it just wasn't there.
But that's just me. And for how the song direction was aimed at, I enjoyed it for the most part.
The strings and piano worked out nicely. The little beat at 1:34 was nice, and that synth that comes in 1:43 was great!! The drum pattern was nice, did you make it or was it a pre-made loop/sample?
Overall, for the direction of the song, I liked the song. It had nice aspects that I was able to appreciate. Nice work!
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