You have to improve dude. This track wasn't really good. After a while it bored me!
I gave you 10 on originality cause I've never heard sth like that.
3 for diversity cause there wasn't anything more.
7 for clarity cause it sounded nearly clear.
3 for effort cause it didn't have much FX used in. There were not many more.
You are ok at making music but try next time to use more effects / samples in the song.
Well... Thnx for the tips but i don't like if people talk like that about my music...
but thnx :D