I like the mysterious, dark mood at the beginning. However, the moving notes at around :15 cut off really suddenly. I think you need to adjust the note lengths so that they're all "bumper-to-bumper" with the next note, or maybe even over-extended. Or, you could just adjust the release on that instrument. I love the percussion at :45, though, and the dark, heavy vibe you have going on shortly after. The effect at 1:23 is awesome! Some of the notes around 1:30 had a similar problem as those around :15, though. I like the mood, atmosphere, and progression of this piece. I think you could've used a bit more rhythmic variation with the snare sample at 3:00. I think the growly bass at 3:13 added a lot to the coda, and overall it felt conclusive. Keep up the good work, JargusCannon! ;)

HA Nice! Your rhythmic production, writing, or whatever you would call it is superb! A joy to listen to--great atmosphere. Reminds me of some old industrial music mixed with one of Stanley kubrick's hauntingly beautiful pieces of music that he tends to use.

Wow...This is simply otherworldly, captivating and so god damn hauntingly beautiful... I also just noticed that this is also your first song entry on NG! Like dude, where the hell did you just suddenly pop out of and steal the show?! haha

honestly, you have some real potential man, this track was very spooky, and the mixing was pretty good.

this gives me the shills dude. great job on using 11 samples too! keeping it simple like me!