Very fast

This was really nice and some very fast paced sound but that what got it kicking for me So lastly nice job here nice effort you really showed us something nifty in music and sound and thats what I was glad to review here you gave the audio portal some Charm on this day nice tune indeed

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I like the synths and the beat, but it progresses awfully slowly. Sounds like you need some more melodic content, although you do have some arpeggios in there (literally playing for the entire 1.5 minutes) that could add some harmonic support. I also wasn't a huge fan of the snare sample at :08. It needs some reverb at the very least. I thought the transition into :23 was solid, though. Obviously, this piece doesn't end conclusively as it is, but I understand that it's a work in progress. You might actually want to tone down the reverb on the arpeggios just to make sure they don't distort the impending melody you should really add. I'd say you have a lot of work to do, but it's a solid start. Keep at it, TeraVex. ;)

o, ur not dead