I'm a big fan of all of your work, honestly. This one is one that I had yet to listen to, and WOW. I have to love any (techno-y) track that captures surreal imagery. The feel of this is fairly positive...and very well done. I would love, really love, to see a counterpart to this, just a quick one, with a darker, more sinister feel. Again, great job. I'll be keeping an eye out for your stuff!
The only thing that could be changed is a tad less bass..not too much, though, because it is very hypnotizing, and good...
Wow thanks for the review. the counter part to this track is "factory floor" as it is a more machinist and darker piece.
this is very nice XD
Pretty nice track you got here XD. very smooth, and easy to listen to. I agree also that the bass could have been turned down just a bit, but other than that, its a great piece of work XD 5/5 from me ^^
Sorry if this offends you, but it sounds a bit like a Red Hot Chili Peppers song for a while, before you switch it up. I could sleep to this music, it's very soothing. I believe the transitions aren't quite nessecary, but you did them ok. Also, nice selection for a fade, fits this song perfectly. Another download for me.
wow thanks although to tell you the truth i based the intro on final fantasy 7
this song is unique. i really like it. only 5 dl's?
anyways the i think the tittle is really awsome also.
Thanks its part two of piece the first is technoid return to power in industrial.
A little Advice...
People do notice your stuff... You just have to be active in the forums and in the AP itself. By giving yourself a 30 day deadline, the quality of your work will diminish and eventually, people will stop taking you seriously, causing you to just give up period. Stick with submitting a track every couple of weeks or so. That way, you'll have time to work on your songs and improving their overall quality^_^.
Onward to the song. It's very simple, which adds to the appeal. Flash artists will have an easy time integrating this into their projects. Overall, there's a good balance between the synths and drums. The bass could be a little lower though. But other than that, a good job here. Don't try too hard, you'll miss out in the long run^_^
well saying one track a day dosnt actually mean im going to make one a day i actually have several tracks already made i only have to keep going making about 1 every two days which gives me enough time and if the quality slips (which i hope wont) then im sure people will tell me and i can improve
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.