Nice

A nice short voice clip, You should make these longer and more variations of the voice,
So this was a nice voice demo you have going on here now there are some slight additions I would push but overall you have presented some "DECENT-VOICE-WORK" here and have made for "A-GOOD-DEMO-REEL", you should think about making more of these they are pretty good of a listen.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
You should make these longer and more variations of the voice

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