This would be a good Credits background track for something! This is definitely good! Keep it up. I'll recommend you for audio portal, you'll be ready soon anyways!

Good Luck M8!

-Bradley Spectrum; another new electronic music artist

Yep, definitely not bad. It's really good for one of your first songs. If you heard some of my old songs (not on this account), you'd probably puke all over yourself. Keep it up - and trust me, time will improve your songs. Just keep making music and having fun. That's the only reason you should be making music - for the fun of it.

Hey it´s not that bad like TBA said! The melodies are actually quite uplifting and the mixing is not top notch but definitely not that bad (at least better than me one year ago ;) I wouldn´t call the chord progression sad, actually... The beat is also fine. You don´t use the most top notch sounds here, but if you just started producing music, you don´t have, too. You´ll find your sound with the time. There are a few bad notes around 2:20 and the end of the track is a bit abrupt. Some velocity editing in the piano could also greatly improve the music. Turn the velocity a bit higher on the strong counting times (like you have 4/4, so it´s basically every quarter with focus on the 1). Then turn a bit randomization on the rest of velocities and the piano will sound much more natural even with a cheap sound. Anyway... Hope this helps.