Okay, so I really appreciate that you actually took your beat and tried to vary it a bit rather than doing the same thing forever. You clearly did what you liked, but it's also unfortunately clear you don't know the power of fruity loops and knowledge base required.
So besides the one good thing everything is not so hot, you clearly should check out something like warbeats.com or even just youtube stuff about fruity loops (FL studio guru is from the image-line crew). Also, and not to be a whore, you can check out my music! I use FL studio 10 myself and I love their work, its why I stick with Image Line! So yeah, go and learn more and make even cooler music!
Thank you for the feedback, it's really appreciated and it means a lot.
I accept that I still have a lot to learn about Fruit Loops and I am always trying to improve. I will definitely be looking up things on YouTube or any other useful website so as to improve and I'll be sure to check out some of your tracks also :)
I'm still quite new to Fruit Loops and I love sitting down and just creating things I like, but I will take in your advice and (hopefully!!!) come back with better music in the future.