I like the instruments and somewhat mysterious mood at the beginning. The beat was cool, and I like the melodies at around :50. You overuse the transition with the crash a lot. It also doesn't really loop that well, and has a rather bare and minimalistic texture throughout. This was a cool idea for a track that you could've done a lot more with, but you didn't. You have the same simple chord progression playing for the entire piece, only varying the instrument you use with it once. This also isn't a structurally complete piece IMO. You need climaxes, bridges, breakdowns, re-intros, or at least a moment of structural relief. It's a pretty good start, but I have a feeling you didn't really display your entire skillset as best you could here. Next time, I'd encourage you to take some risks with your music-making! Hope this review helped. Keep at it, man. ;)

5/10