- Pretty good! Not a bad batch of sample lines.
- Great audio quality, very crisp and concise.
- I would say focus just a slight bit on more annunciation for some of the longer lines and slow down. The first one was perfectly timed but a few after that felt slightly hurried.
- Just a personal preference but perhaps a slight bit more variety in emotions/line types.
Overall very clear, no background noise, and an easy on the ears voice! Good work :D
Thanks for the constructive feedback. This was my 1st attempt at making any voice demo at all (basically as soon as I got the recording technicalities figure out), and it's outdated now (2 years old).
I'm due for a revamped demo with more recent examples. I'm not a classically trained singer, thespian, or voice actress, but it's tips like these that have helped me continually improve. So, thanks again for taking the time to mention the pros & cons, from your perspective.
Pretty good sample so far. Wished you have more variety of lines to see what potentials lie in your voice acting.
Speakin' of potentials, I can see you voicing some badass female characters. Maybe that should be your forte?
oo thx for the input :-D I'm all about trying some bossy / bitchy badass / alpha female type chars.. lately I've had requests to be 2 different sassy AI characters which have been fun.. I'll update this voice demo soon - it's almost a year old I definitely have some more examples since then, but my forte is not accents or impersonations, so just exploring what I can offer in terms of my capabilities, and expanding those with practice. :)
You got a good natural voice. It's pretty unique and has a certain depth and character that sadly too many female VAs are kinda lacking. I'm very, very far from being a pro with any right to give even constructive criticism, so take my words here with pounds of salt. Your acting, though not the worst I've ever heard, needs improvement, but don't take remark that too harsh, the improvement very much just comes with experience and in the not too distant future you'll listen back on this and be like "Oh my god, I sounded like THAT? GROSS" hahah.
Your vocal sound has the potential to be really great for a LOT of things, but to be truthful when I heard this demo my first thought was "This would be killer in the mumblecore style." Look it up if you haven't heard of it, it's a style I really like.
I'll have my eye, well, ear on you. I'll be looking forward to your next pieces and your inevitable improvement as long as you keep with it. Have fun!
Oh heya thanks a lot for your valuable input Sir! Your opinion means a lot and I look forward to gaining the experience necessary to become really good at all things I do. I looked up mumblecore and watched some examples on YouTube - interesting! Looks like something that could help bridge the gap between me being a beginner to a more confident (voice)actress . I'm eager to get my characters up and at it and that's my main drive in learning to be comfortable with my voice so I can voice characters and get better at storytelling in my future games.
Thanks for your encouragement and support - btw your voice is amazing & inspiring! You're clearly a pro!
I like it, a few improvements and you are there!
Oh heya thanks! :-D Feel free to leave any specific suggestions & I'll try to apply them in the future!
Sounds wicked good so far! :D Keep it up!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.