Not bad work on this
polyrythms like crazy. The percussion definitely needs to be tied together with somethig doesn't it. The melody did a decent job of smoothing things out a bit. I'm very glad that you participated in this little exercise - I hope it did what it was supposed to do! As a normal submission I would be a bit more harsh with the scoring but I understand that it's very difficult to get the numbers to do what you want them to without changing them. For your participation, you get teh 5!
I could've sworn I'd responded to this review three times already... I'm very glad I participated in this little exercise too; this one is actually one of my favorites... I don't even know why, something about it just makes me want to keep listening... at any rate, thanks for the review!