Not bad, but I feel like the main melody was far too high up. The arp should have been higher and the melody should have been lower IMO, it would have provided some strength.
Trust me, i tried but it ended drowning the melody completely :c
Lovely bit I think it could do with a bit more work!
I think the piano sounds great, the reverb you used is brilliant and everything is mixed great.
I think the tune would've benefited with some large impact sounds do go with the reverse crashes.
The choir sounds great though I wish the notes were legato and slided into eachother or had some strings in the back to compliment them.
I like the polyrhythmic shakers but I personally wouldn't of panned them hard left and right, though it still works.
Still a great job though mate.
I am still searching for a good reeverbkick for the reverse crashes (My HDD crapped and i lost all of my VEC/VEH amples :c)
I will touch up the chorus a bit now that you mention it, i think i can use legato (Still new to knotak samples hahaha)
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.