brink of trash.
some kids just get too much positive reinforcement at home.
Oh man you need to make some changes
Okay well, erm what can I say,
First off that backing beat, is just far too repetetive and gets boring rather quickly, You need to make your drum pattern more intricate, more diverse,
Okay the piano piece was ok! it just didn't fall into time with that beat, because of this it all sounded out of place, nothing seemed to fit properly, the piano started off really good though not in time with that beat and towards the end that piano piece just didn't seem like music it just trailed off into the realms of random key hitting
Now I'm not trying to discourage you, just want to offer some advice, else you'll not know if you're doing good at what you're trying
Don't give up! keep trying til it sounds right, Don't know what tools, software, herdware you're using, but if you're using a midi keyboard or something, or whatever try using a metronome and sync that timing to your drums
Hope I can help you release you're true potential
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