Cool piece dude.
But it's kinda typical, same chords than most blink182 songs hehe :)
Still cool though.
The recording quality is pretty bad, and your drum machine is kinda cheap too.
In the other I like your acoustic stuff, it's well recorded and have good riffs, maybe we could make a collab piece, check my stuff and see if you'd like a mix of your acoustic and my electric and drum. Email me if you have questions