I like this! It makes me sway and at the same time dance. Excellent job :D
This a very great tune. Games should use this game more
Perfect! Do I have permission to use it in a car commercial I'm making for a friend? (No profits will be made, this is only for fun and will ONLY go up on youtube as a VIDEO not those preloader commercials, it is only a demonstration, the 'product' in the video isn't for sale, only show. This 'product' was made on a virtual game not in real life and there for CANNOT be sold for any real profit or even virtual profit due to the site's rules about 'selling' your creations. Please PM me with your yes or no)
Diversity: Not many instruments present, and the song is really short. Maybe add some more futuristic elements to the song.
Clarity: Your stringed instrument with teh melody sounds too, well "Plucked." Smooth out the sound slightly.
Well, I was trying to go for a Popish Rock song, like in a Nissan car commercial I've been seeing lately. I know that it didn't start off too well with there only being one instrument, but it was too late to change anything when I noticed. I was originally aiming for something around 45 seconds for the song, and have it balanced out a little more, but I was sorta rushing to get this finished. As for the plucked feel, I thought it sounded fine, but maybe I should've thought twice about that. All the instruments I used were presets, which was probably a bad idea. I'll have to remember these things the next time I do a piece like this.
Thanks for reviewing!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.