Thoughts while listening:
15 seconds is a loooong time to wait for the song to start. Can't say I'm a big fan of the faux guitar sound...the highs are a bit too ear-stabby. Anyways...compositionally - decent chord progression, some nice change-ups at about 1:40. I know how finicky that can be to mix in. I'm kinda wanting some more instrumentation here. Can't hear any bass. Nice bridge at 2:50. And a 15 second silent outro. Perhaps my speakers are missing something, being labtec computer speakers that came with the Dell I'm currently using...
Thoughts after listening:
-Needs a more complete instrumentation. You've completely filled the highs, but I'm hearing almost nothing in the lows and low-mids.
-Mix is a bit off. You have to bring out your pads a bit more to make sure they're providing the soundscape you need for your chord progression.
-Where's the lead line? At this point, what you have is a drummer and a rhythm guitar and a pad. Bands are put together the way they are for a reason - everything you have here is great, but you gotta use it to support a melody! I want a singer or lead guitar or something! What you've got is a backtrack. It's a start.
Some good points;
-Chord progression is good. Catchy overall, certainly something I'd like to solo over.
-Beat is solid, nicely put together, simple...but that's not a bad thing.
-Loved the changups. You can certainly mess with it a bit more, but at present, it's workable.
Overall, I see this as a start, not a finished product. Doesn't mean you should give up on it, but if you wanna make this really pop, it requires more work, IMHO.
You are right man, thank you for your input ;)
RIP my ears, May 26, 2015. This is excellent.
Is it realy too loud? :O
Damn this is really awesome!Excellent work,mate!
I wouldn't have made this track if you didn't do that art ;)
Wow that was loud! Great build up, this must be my favorite music of yours now :D
ooh loord its starts soo atmosferic and then thecno but still atmosferic its like and adventure that you awoke and beggin! the need to pay you!!
Thanks man, maybe one day they will :)
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.