Oh my God!!!! WHY?!?! PLEASE FOR THE LOVE OF ALL THAT IS HOLY FINISH THE SONG!

Once again, a WONDERFUL opening to the song. You know what I think would be a wonderful addition to the opening strings and synths is some backing bass thumping along with the whole thing. Though, Again i have to say this song feels incomplete. I'm hearing a WHOLE lot of potential but it just feels almost as if its just not finished. I would love to hear the finished version of this song when its done. Also by no means were the strings cheap. I think you could of used some french horns in the background to bring out the sound at that part but that is just my personal preference. Keep doing what your doing!

Wyldfyre1

Pleeeeease do not listen to the guy who said that the strings were too "cheap". He isn't necessarily wrong, but while they do sound very plastic I think that they fit very well for this type of song. If this is modeled after the trance style of the early 2000s, then you certainly have the right strings. If you want to add that airy, warm style to them though, I suggest adding a little bit of reverb. Use a light setting on them to add an airy, spacy effect that doesn't clash with the songs vibe, and see how you like it. A little reverb or delay here and there on some instruments can change the whole game! It would work very nicely.

After hearing your most recent song, I had to come check out some of your other songs. I am very impressed with the work that you do. You have some great potential in some areas and just pure talent in others. I'm so glad I found you on here! You seem to be just like me in the fact that you just post demo after demo, and even if it isn't a demo, you still say it's not fully finished. On my page, I have demo after demo...it's saddening to me that I can't finish anything. XD Anyways, nice work on this one. I'm glad I favorited you so that if you finish it, I can hear it!

OMG... This is Amazing....

I really like the intro and the synth choice!!! Pretty good job, my only problem with this is the strings, they sound too cheeeaaaaaap, i think this would sound a lot better with something better. Mixing is good too. I can't comment further because is a demo, but sounds good so far.