I like the rhymes that youve used on this instrumental. There are a few times where you slip off beat, either saying things too slow or slightly too fast, but other than that, this track is pretty dope man.
Work on enunciating your words better and maintaining your flow through out. These things are easy to fix, you just need to practice. With time comes skill, the more hours you put in, the more noticeable it will become to you and listeners alike.
Youve got a lot of potential in this game man, keep up the great work. I cant wait to hear some more stuff from you man because I feel like every song you release, or battle you participate in, is getting better and better.