This is a pretty neat song, but I felt that it didn't have enough energy to it. I think you should have some other synths playing the lead melody as well to mix up the sounds. I feel as it stands, your bass and percussional aspects are overpowering the main melody lead.
I think a nice ripping saw synth with some high pitched gated synth (like what you have now, but one octave higher), and then one octave lower, to really get some power infused in there.
On top of all that, I also feel a pad would come in handy, to fill up the "empty" feel i'm getting.
I also think your kick could be a little more banging, perhaps reverb?
Anyways, all in all, it IS a pretty damn fine song, I hear an insane level of potential in it, so i'll drop the 5 bomb on your face. Keep them coming, you can get there if you keep trying.
I'd like you to check out some of my stuff sometime ^^.
Thanks, once I get the full version of fruity I'll try to fix this if I can remake it correctly. =)