Nice first try.
My first go at making a song in a generator was not good. You'll get better if you continue to practice. What program do you use? If you need any help learning, send me a message.
Also, you can find my music at http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/view.php?id=1741901 if you're interested.
i use anvil studio then audacity to get the mp3
The name caught my attention, but I was let down by it being crap. Though ok for a start I suppose. Though very original.
i just slammed stuff on the music sheet