First thought, the mixing is superb. Sounds great! I kinda thought the progression was amateur for a moment until it kicks in, and suddenly my attention is caught. The synth was a little off-putting; this song is perfectly capable of getting by without that poor electronic noise (not to say it's dissonant; but I suppose -personally- I think it's in the way). I thought at times the vocals could have hit a little harder; you sort of maintain a consistent and sort of repetitive, borderline monotone cadence. Fitting for lyrical content, I'm sure, but I guess I've been listening to too much Stone Temple Pilots to be settled with what you do.
All in all, great song. Surprised to find this sort of tune on the portal!
Glad you still enjoyed despite the minor downsides! And of course, let's keep the portal varied! :)
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