The ringing in the background is awful. It's just bad. It just goes on too, without variation. I hate saying things are bad, I really do. But there are few positives to this song, unfortunately.
No man call them negatives out and don't feel bad, i need the criticism if I want o improve. I want to be great and honest feedback helps. Thanks man!
I noticed my review is gone and I dunno but, I don't really see the difference in this version honestly, same as my last review: "The overall melody is well...all over the place and quite random. Some of the elements of the song I do like but I feel there should be not a chaotic structure but more organized. There seems to be no carrying key here. It could be executed well with more of a melody, I do like the synths and stuff."
Keep at it though, you have some nice chiptune elements, its just the overall melody thats the issue.
Thanks and I will. I had trouble updating the file so I uploaded a whole new one. The feedback helps alot.