The genre sounds correct and overall it sounds good, but there are several places that sounded very off to me. For example right about 1:00, the melody sounded pretty bad. The notes you picked did not mesh well at all. And since that repeats those places too. There is also some questionable synths that you've picked that do not mesh with everything else. I liked your piece, but there are just some places that do not currently work.
Definitely a really nice chill out piece. I think at a couple points in the song the bell went off key and it was noticieable, so try to make sure you stay on key. The crashes/downsweeps were a bit much at a couple points too. So only try to use them every 8 bars or so. Othere than that, good melody and chord progression. I love the vibe.
If you could check out my piece and review it, I'd love the help.
thanks well its all in key pretty much note wise...I didnt go out of key in scales when making melodies..but maybe u just mean the timing or notes at some point didnt sound great or in harmony? Defo in key though. Yeh mayeb I go OTT with fx etc haha...ill check urs later