I dig this song. It gets stuck in my head. I like the two vocals going at once, it sounds cool. The only thing that kinda bugs me is that one guitar is so distorted you can't really tell that its a guitar... sounds like... stuff crashing... Good stuff.
The song was ok. The recording was really bad quality. Oh, and if youre serious about being in a band i wouldent release your songs on NG because you get no copyrights and people might steal your music. Its your choice though. Maybe you dont care. I personally wouldent release my bands stuff on NG, id go to soundclick or MP3.com because they give you copyrights.