Ok. So I've added you to my favorites list, as I am very curious to see if this sound will continue and develop. I like what you have, but I think it's a good baseline, as opposed to a completed work. I'll use one of my tracks as an example (so take the bias into account) http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/522015 . You might enjoy it. // Ok, I thought about this a bit more, so here are some other tracks that you might enjoy (again, take the self-bias into account) http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/515910 | http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/548719 | http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/570873 . Enough with the shameless self promotion, but I was trying to illustrate a point about taking hard sounds and working with them more. I look forward to more of your work.