It's ok

Alright man the into was good. The drums have a nice sound (don't change their loudness) but THE GUITARS MUST BE LOUDER.

Then endig idk if you were drunk but that just plain sucked. Come on you could have at least included some power riffs in there or anything at all. Seriously it sounded like a dying cat/whale.

Sorry if it sounds like im negative I just give mostly pesimistic constructive criticism. Nice intro though with blending the two guitars together and nice mix tempo of the two.