Alright man the into was good. The drums have a nice sound (don't change their loudness) but THE GUITARS MUST BE LOUDER.
Then endig idk if you were drunk but that just plain sucked. Come on you could have at least included some power riffs in there or anything at all. Seriously it sounded like a dying cat/whale.
Sorry if it sounds like im negative I just give mostly pesimistic constructive criticism. Nice intro though with blending the two guitars together and nice mix tempo of the two.
lol, thats a pefect way to describe it, lol that thing at the end isnt part of the song, its some weird sound taht came out after i converted the song to mp3, i have nno clue what it is, but yes, it does sound like a dying whale :)