First of all: Great work here!
I like the song slowly building. Great use of FX in the Intro and the white noise sounding synth. I would turn down the Volume. I like the chords starting at ~3 min but in the tension building part after the rhythms feels choppy. Good reuse of the intro after that part I enjoyed your song till the end.
Good work in mixing tho i would lower the cutoff of the kick but thats just me.

Some of the melodie's and chord progressions sound really familiar but that could be just me. The track is awsome. the kick does feels a bit pushed and boosted in the mix. also the hihat's are a bit to much to the background in my opinion. This is defenitly an interresting piece of music you have here and I think you are worthy to be scouted for the NG audio portal ;)

I don't really like the middle part cause of the bass and kick there, I do like the melody's

Keep it going man and you will do really well here ^^