lol not bad
in truth the organ makes this song sound like its out of the monkey island sountrack
the sounds that your using are obviously fruity loops instruments and although its not very clean thers nothing wrong with.
the main rythym is either a 3x osc or a ts404
but either way good song
keep writing music man
check out some of my music if ur interested
http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/view.php?id=1595732