This is the final revision to http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/618052
and
http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/618059
My cousin and I cooked up this batch. And she did it without DAW experience. All with my help, of course, of course.
Featuring Amii [BUT SHE DON'T HAVE A NEWGROUNDS ACCOUNT]!
FL Studio 11, Xfer Serum, Sytrus, and FX plugins.
I'm not really in the right mindset to review this, but fuck it!
I feel like the progression could be a little faster. I love the instruments throughout, but, as usual, the drums here just don't do the rest of the track justice in my opinion. I can't quite put my finger on what else this needs at the moment, but it might be missing a proper chorus section. Also, it needs a b-section; Something other than that piano so as to jump out at me. lol
All in all though, this isn't a bad start.
8/10 4/5
You are free to copy, distribute and transmit this work under the following conditions:
*Please contact me if you would like to use this in a commercial project. We can discuss the details.
Kelpalots 
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