I'm not really in the right mindset to review this, but fuck it!
I feel like the progression could be a little faster. I love the instruments throughout, but, as usual, the drums here just don't do the rest of the track justice in my opinion. I can't quite put my finger on what else this needs at the moment, but it might be missing a proper chorus section. Also, it needs a b-section; Something other than that piano so as to jump out at me. lol
All in all though, this isn't a bad start.