Really enjoyable.

It's unfortunate that this track is 3 years old, as I would have LOVED to have seen a complete version of this.

Its a good start

If I were you, with the lyrics going quickly like that in the beginning, I'd add in a good drum beat, even just the basic beat. I like the sound of those guitars coming in before the cut-off. The lyrics are pretty good, vocals aren't much to my preference but overall it is a very good start of a song, I'd like to hear the finished result.