Very chill... I like how you're laying out the atmosphere here. Vocals, rhythm, bass, and various synths, but the the moment at .48 seconds really sets the tone for me to just enjoy it.
There are certain things that were left to be desired and that was a progression that could project some kind of inspiring lift, but it instead lingers in suspension. Which is fine--just a personal preference because I enjoyed the atmosphere of this piece. The other is perhaps for some added depth around 2:40 because everything drops out. Not saying what is done is right or wrong as this is still enjoyable. I think you have a nice sense of aesthetics in terms of timbre.
Thanks for the response Phonometrologist,
I think this is the first solid critique I've had on here, so the time you've taken to write this is much appreciated. One of my biggest issues with production is filling space with less. I often fall into the trap of layering too much and this is something I'm looking to improve on. I'm beginning to explore stereo and hard panning left and right but still feel I need some time studying as well as playing.
Once again thanks for the review.
So far so good, I love low end sub bass myself, so even getting carried away isn't all too bad. Sometimes our mistakes and flaws in music becomes a style, not a mistake. I like the atmospheric sounds going on. Really chill song. Love much!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.