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EDIT: Remastered! I'll do it once again someday, but this is at least an improvement. No longer as muddy in the low-mids.

I'm not entirely sure how I feel about this one yet. It feels convoluted and forced. Hopefully it'll grow on me.


Stand in line for the giving tree,
I'll offer every living piece of me.
Take any branch and all the leaves,
I'll try to give you everything you need.
When it rains, it always pours.
These butterflies seem harder to ignore.
Like ships that crash on sandy shores:
There's beauty in this tragedy of yours.

Your eyes sing lullabies.
I'm knocking at your door -
What are we waiting for?
When you look at me,
I forget how to breathe.
You turn my insides out;
This fire's not burning out.

I know I said you're not inside my head,
But you're all I think of when I go to bed.
I think of everything you said,
And everything I wish you'd said instead.
Hurricanes inside of me,
These roaring waters never were so deep.
And while I lay here counting sheep,
You sit at home and wonder why you can't stay asleep.

What are we waiting for?

What do you do when you're losing your mind,
And how do I know if I'm wasting my time?
What do you do when you're wasting your time,
And how do I know if I'm losing my mind?


duuude...this has a lot of a Muse vibe to it, I think. I see you are against me on the Audio deathmatch! This song is really great, I can imagine it somewhere on the radio or something! Although the mixing and EQ could be a lot better, I would definitely go softer on the low end cause it kinda muds the mix, but despite that, I think its very cool, you got quite a voice! I like it! I think with a proper mixing, this song could definitely beat our submission, although I don't know what your submission's gonna be!. Anyways, good luck! And let's rock!!

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in my opinion the high intruments could be harder and the base layer a bit softer. but its a pretty damn good song. in my opion the drum and the clapping is a bit too prominent. this is just what i think though. sorry for the conveluted mess of words, just writng down what i hear when listening.

Jacob responds:

I can definitely agree with that. I'll likely fix that when I get home this evening.
Thank you!

Fixed (hopefully) as of 4/6/2015

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Mar 29, 2015
5:48 AM EDT
File Info
10 MB
4 min 22 sec
4.60 / 5.00

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