Reminds me a bit of Austin Wintory's work. For the feeling you were going for, you've achieved it. As I listen to it I'm reminded a bit of Joe Hisashi as I listen to the end. Quite melancholic.
I don't usually review music nor am I too musically inclined. Sorry I can't provide better input. Just letting you know I thought you made a good piece.
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