Did I ever mention Penderecki with you? That's what those strings remind me of, with the crazy slides and what not. Sounds like a huge influence on you.
I feel like maybe it's a touch loud? I like how the cool synth thing in the first 15 seconds of the track is the focal point, and the noises from the second half hog the spotlight a little bit.
Also, I don't know if it's the ng audio player or what, but the loop gets snipped at the end. I'm guessing it is, because it does that to my loops all the time, too.
Interesting piece!