This was cool
This was cool, has good effort in the sounds and feel of it i liked it, you should present more stuff like this
hey look kids! its bright eyes' asthmatic, tone-deaf half-brother! its just too bad that he lost his fingers, or at least i hope he did, because playing guitar with stumps is the only reasonable excuse for this terrible, terrible song.
I think the song was ok. The lyrics were mediocre. The guitar playing was kind of sloppy. I think you were trying too much to sound like someone else. But it was a good effort. Practice some more and release another track down the line.
I havnt heard music with a song with it for months now.This was pretty good.The lyrics were good,but the guitar was pretty normal,not that original.