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My first Song! Please could you leave a review on what you think? It would mean a lot to me! Also - I need help in becoming noticed. If you like what you hear be sure to share this! Thanks

A current work in progress but i managed to pull a first draft together


Good work,but not too much.I see you can make better things,just have to,like,listen back to your music for for or five times.First of all,your synth follows a pretty wierd pattern from the start to the finish.Second thing,your beat is too weak,and again doesn't change much throughout the song.Third thing,is an completely awkward ending.You should consider those things and maybe make another song.I promise i will scout you immediately when one of you songs have my 4-stars review.
Have a nice day anyway :)

sigma16 responds:

Thanks for the review :) Ill try my best to improve with a new song, I made this pretty much on the first day I got FL studio so i wasnt expecting it to be very good :S But im practicing a lot and hope to get a new song out soon :3

first, sorry for bad english :p (i'm french)
you said you wanted me to be honest, so here it is : 1.5/5
i'm not saying you're a bad creator but this is your first song and i know you can improve :)
first of all, the repetitive melody is kinda strange, doesn't look so reached. i don't know how we call the music notes in english, but using C# and D# is REALLY strange (yes, i know, when i hear a note i know what it is :p)
then, the drums are really messed up, we can't find the rythm easily, we must think, and try to think on a music isn't good in my opinion.
at 00:32 melody becomes interesting, but the fact that you don't use snares in the drum lines makes the music a little poor, if you know what i mean (i don't know if it's your goal to make it sound like that)
at 00:48, using E is not really good (music note xd)
at 01:20, we're waiting for a drop, but i know it's a WIP so... :)
i know you might find that strange that i tell you all that but i did no music, anyway it's been play 9 years since i play piano...
last thing, can you tell me how you call the notes in english plz xD (in french it's do ré mi fa sol la si do)
waiting for more music ! :D

sigma16 responds:

Thanks for being honest :P Im trying to improve with a brand new song i plan on making, I hope to vary things a bit more there. The same pattern is repeating because i wanted to keep it simple, not using too many patterns. And the notes in english :/ well, you could just use the letters like you did before (C,D,E,F,G,A,B,C) ;)

you could change the end its too abrupt, also Its a bit repetitive....
but meh its OK, seems nice for GD levels

sigma16 responds:

Thanks for your honest review, I really appreciate it. Being completely honest, it isnt very good IMO either. The ending is abrupt because it was initially just a preview for the song, but im not finishing it anymore so I made it into a loop.

NIce one! It could be an 8-bit song.

sigma16 responds:

Thanks :3 I might replace the synth with an 8 bit sound in the full version...

I wanna use this for a GD song! Recommended you for the audio portal :)
Also love the bass in this one, but IMO it comes in too early XD
Overall great one :D

sigma16 responds:

Im not going to finish this :/ But im going to remix it ;) It wasnt finished and i was gunna have the bass come in later. Thanks for the review

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Mar 22, 2015
3:18 PM EDT
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1 min 33 sec

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