im sorry guys, this piece of music is absolutely crap. I tried to make it good. it sterted well, but got worse and worse. here it is, like any of you care. the offbeat is hard to work with and makes it sound worse. I might have one more go at offbeat piano parts, ok, because this is so terrible it has put me off. enjoy my other pieces of music (I belive it hard to enjoy this one)
P.S: the new piece, that will be offbeat and good, will be coming out soon. sorry for the delays on this one.