Base Structure Down
It sounds quite nice, throughout the song, but it lacks a lot. The 'drums' are mostly just a bunch of white noise. That got repetitive, and you could've done more.
Usually when I think of white noise, I think of the noise I hear on TV's, Radios, so basically Electronic stuff. Some blips, and beeps could've added some more, as well as some more electronic sounds.
I think you've got something going, but it's just the base structure. Keep working on this! :)
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A little creepy,
almost frightening, and a lot of suspense. I like it.