This track has a feel of deprivation, self loathing, and Marilyn Manson written all over it.
With that out of the way, the only thing that i sensed was wrong with this track
was the general mixing. It took some getting used to, but first impressions are everything.
I felt that the drums were lacking in punch in the heavier parts. The bass was too low during the guitar parts. The vocals had this weird crackling to them that probably sounded good at the time
but, in all honesty, doesn't in post. I know all of that is on a technical level but sadly it reflects.

Overall, this track has a very clear sense of who it is, but doesnt know why it is.
Dont get me wrong, i could spark a jay and jam out to this song all night. Its just the
little things in music that can make a track out off kilter. And trust me, its really easy. Ive been
trying my damnedest to write songs like this. I would have everything recorded and planned out all neatly, but when it came to mixing it required the Midas touch of Music in order to do it.

And with that i say goodluck and godspeed!