A lot of these melodies felt like they were to cliché... Not like they've been used before, but they felt too predictable. Instrument choice was great, and the tempo change at 1:30 was... parfait! (Perfect).
Oh waltzing! That's lovely. Your instrument choice is perfect and the overall mixing is pretty balanced. I feel that the musicality of it could be worked on more. It is akin to a waltz mood, but it would fall more into the flow if there was a contrasting theme to make us want the return of the original theme brought by the flute. Modulating upwards does help to build up energy, but hearing that same main theme so many times becomes tiresome. In the time between the building up and right before the end where it slows down, I think the injection of contrasting material could work very well. I also think I heard the rhythms weren't completely in-sync with each other, so it felt like instruments were lagging behind each other. Aside from that, you did a pretty nice job. I'm biased towards music that waltzes, but I feel there's not too much of it that goes on, or at least cinematic types like this. Good work!
Thank you for your commentary! :D
I do think that I got lazy with this track, unfortunately. I got tired and didn't really spend much time polishing.
As for the out of sync rhythms, I'll be honest, I hadn't even thought about it until your comment. I'll be careful of that in the future. Thanks again!
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