Industrial rock on newgrounds... sweet! This is very well made overall. Though the background synths are a bit too quiet, and your snare could be a little punchier, but this is only my opinion of what might sound better. Great work!
This is one of the latest song we´ve been making, please feel free to criticize our work (constructively I hope) for we don't have a good pair of monitors (yet) and can use some tips from someone who maybe does. Or you can say hello or something jaja anything goes. Thanks for listening.
Esta es una de nuestras canciones más recientes, porfavor sientanse libres de criticarnos (de manera constructiva, espero) pues aun no tenemos un buen par de monitores y nos haria bien escuchar de alguien que tal vez sí tenga. Gracias por escuchar.
Letra/Lyrics
Tengo el alma desnuda/ My soul is naked
Predomina el color azul/ The color blue predominates
Me despierta el aroma del sudor /The smell of sweat wakes me
Qué más quieres?/What more do you want?
Quemas acre/You burn, acre
Queda polvo gris /All that's left is gray dust
en la demencia /In dementia
vive esta atracción /This attraction lives
Cuando ya se retira/ When the reciprocal sensation
la recíproca sensación/ retires
un recuerdo agudiza /a memory sharpens
el color /the color
Qué más quieres?/What more do you want?
Quemas acre/You burn, acre
Queda polvo gris /All that's left is gray dust
Y el furor /And the fury
que desató /that she let loose
me dejó color azul / Left me color blue
en la demencia /In dementia
vive esta traición /Lives this treachery
Industrial rock on newgrounds... sweet! This is very well made overall. Though the background synths are a bit too quiet, and your snare could be a little punchier, but this is only my opinion of what might sound better. Great work!
Hey thanks a lot for your review! And for listening! I think you are right. Gonna work on the synths and the snare and upload an update soon. Thnks again! :).
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.